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robin lee

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Can you check to see if there are grammar errors?

At work I am easily overstressed when there are numerous deadlines to meet. I view my high blood pressure condition as a barrier at work as I cannot deal with too much stress daily. It is hard to multi-task too. I take more time to complete tasks compared to my colleagues. To overcome stress, I decide to give myself more time to complete the tasks.
 

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I view my high blood pressure condition as a barrier at work as I cannot deal with too much stress daily.
What do you mean by that?
 

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With high blood pressure I tend to get anxious when I face stress so in a way it slows me down. In that way I said it was a barrier. Maybe I should not say that - should say it slows me down.
 

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I view my high blood pressure condition as a barrier at work as I cannot deal with too much stress daily.

I suffer from high blood pressure, which impairs my ability to cope with stress.

I guess you can say your condition is a handicap.


 

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At work, I am easily overstressed when there are numerous deadlines to meet. I view my high blood pressure condition as a [STRIKE]barrier[/STRIKE] hindrance at work as I cannot deal with too much stress in a day. [STRIKE]daily.[/STRIKE] It is hard to multi-task too. I take more time to complete tasks, compared to my colleagues. To overcome stress, I [STRIKE]decide[/STRIKE] try to give myself more time to complete the tasks.
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