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    Many wish to see changes

    Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentence? I am not sure if my sentence sounds natural.

    Many wish to see changes in capitalist society, but nobody seems to have a feasible solution to bring them about and create a more equal society.

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    Re: Many wish to see changes

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentence? I am not sure if my sentence sounds natural.

    Many wish to see changes in a/our capitalist society, but nobody seems to have a feasible practical solution to bring them about and create that can lead to a more equal equitable society.
    Your sentence reminds of of George Orwell's line from Animal Farm:
    All animals are equal but some animals are more equal than others.

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    #3

    Re: Many wish to see changes

    We can create a society in which everyone is equally poor.

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