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    Bored with his job at Wall Street

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

    Bored with his job at Wall Street, Peter moved to South Africa where her bought a farm and started make wine.

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    Re: Bored with his job at Wall Street

    Change 'at' to 'on' and correct two careless mistakes for yourself.

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    Re: Bored with his job at Wall Street

    I really do not understand how I made those two mistakes. I am going to write my sentence again with Rover_KE's correction.

    Bored with his job on Wall Street, Peter moved to South Africa where he bought a farm and started to make wine.

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