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  1. keannu's Avatar
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    #1

    your great cooperation

    Which would be better to respect the other party?

    1.We have made a great development due to your great cooperation for the last 10 years.
    2. Your great cooperation has helped us to make a great development for the last 10 years.

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    #2

    Re: your great cooperation

    Quote Originally Posted by keannu View Post
    Which would be better for expressing our appreciation of the other party?

    1.We have developed enormously thanks to your great cooperation over the past ten years.
    2. Your great cooperation has helped us make huge strides over the the past ten years.
    - Don't use "great" twice in a paragraph.
    - Spell out "ten."

    I hope that helps.
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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