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    #1

    First, we must create the atmosphere. You will be

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "First, we must create the atmosphere. You will be fundamental at that point, helping Kevin to live the experience. We both can work the wisdom words that “the ghost” must tell to Kevin."

    Thanks.

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    Re: First, we must create the atmosphere. You will be

    I think the word "fundamental" is not appropriate there. Perhaps you can say: you role will be important/crucial/essential/significant
    I am not a teacher.

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    #3

    Re: First, we must create the atmosphere. You will be

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    First, we must create the atmosphere. You will be fundamental highly needed at that point, helping Kevin to live the experience. Together, we both can work out the "words of wisdom" words that “the ghost” must tell to Kevin.
    See above.

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