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  1. hai_lua_t2's Avatar
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    #1

    Please help me correct a letter

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing this letter for a help from you. I had a great time to spend some days at your hotel last week. You could check this information base on this email address and hotel's database. Unfortunately, I forgot to take my watch when I checked out. I had just realized that after being on the airplane yesterday. It is an automatic watch, with black leather band and silver dial. The display is analog and case material is stainless steel. Honestly, I don't remember exactly where I leave it. But It could be in the bathroom or on the bed. I would deeply appreciate if you could help me take it back. I hope it is not too late for me to have it again.
    If any additional information is required, please let me know.


    Looking forward to your feedback!


    Sincerely,
    abc
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 08-Mar-2017 at 22:11. Reason: Removed extra line breaks.

  2. teechar's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: Please help me correct a letter

    Quote Originally Posted by hai_lua_t2 View Post
    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing this letter to ask for your help with finding an item I left behind in your hotel. from you.

    I had a great time to spent some a few days at your hotel last week (27 Feb.-2 Mar.), and I really enjoyed my stay there.

    You could check this information base on this email address and hotel's database.
    Unfortunately, I forgot to take my watch when I checked out, and I only had just realized that after being getting on the air plane. yesterday.

    It is an automatic Casio watch, with a black leather band and a silver dial. The display is analog and the case material is stainless steel.
    Honestly, I don't remember exactly where I leave it.
    B
    I cannot remember where exactly I left it in the room, but it could have been in the bathroom or on the bed.

    I would deeply greatly appreciate it if you could help me locate my watch. It was a birthday present from my sister, so it has great sentimental value to me. take it back.

    I hope it is not too late for me to have my watch back. it again.

    If any additional information is required, please let me know.

    Thank you for all your help, and I await your reply. Looking forward to your feedback!

    Yours faithfully,

    Sincerely,
    abc
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