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    A glorious golden sunset

    Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentence?

    A glorious golden sunset poured into the room giving antique furniture an orange hue.

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    Re: A glorious golden sunset

    You need "the antique furniture" because we are talking about that in the room.

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    Re: A glorious golden sunset

    I wouldn't say that a sunset poured into the room. How about "The light from the glorious, golden sunset poured into ..."? You need a comma after "room" as well as the definite article that teechar already pointed out.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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