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    Did I phrase the following sentences correctly? Please advise.

    1) Stand here and keep me out of sight of the customer.
    2) Keep the king out of sight of the queen.
    3) What is the sight radius of the telescope.
    4) The soldier got into position, aimed his gun and wait for the enemy to go within his sight before firing.
    4) Please block the view of me from her by standing here.
    5) Please block her view of me by standing here.

    Are the above mentioned sentences correct? Please advise.

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    Re: Did I phrase the following sentences correctly? Please advise.

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) Stand here and keep me out of sight of the customer.
    2) Keep the king out of sight of the queen.
    3) What is the sight radius of the telescope?
    4) The soldier got into position, aimed his gun and waited for the enemy to get in his sight before firing.
    5) Please block the view of me from her by standing here. Wrong.
    6) Please block her view of me by standing here.

    Are the above mentioned sentences correct? Please advise.
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