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    #1

    Laura sat at an outside cafe

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    Laura sat at an outside cafe in the shade of the awning, enjoying her drink and watching groups of tourists sweating under the scorching sun.

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    Re: Laura sat at an outside cafe

    I'd probably start with "Laura sat under the awning of an outside café ..."
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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