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    #1

    Are the following sentences and paragraph written correctly? Please advise.

    1) The flavour of the food you cook will be judge differently by each individual/judges.
    2) The perceptions of flavours differ for each individual, therefore your food will be judged differently by each individual.
    3) I received a traffic offence ticket while I held/possess/was still using X province licence but I have changed my licence to Y province licence. Under the circumstances, the traffic violation/offence/summon will be recorded on which diriver licence? ( can I say held/possess and can I use under the cirsumstances in the above paragraph? Is the a better way of phrasing it?).
    4) On which driver licence history will the traffic violation be recorded on?

    Are the above sentences and paragraph written correctly? Please advise.

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    #2

    Re: Are the following sentences and paragraph written correctly? Please advise.

    No. Please ask just one question at a time.

    In sentence 1) I see two errors of grammar.

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    #3

    Re: Are the following sentences and paragraph written correctly? Please advise.

    Quote Originally Posted by jutfrank View Post
    Please ask just one question at a time ...
    ... and please give each one a title containing some of the words of the sentence - such as The flavour of the food you cook and The perceptions of flavours.

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