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    David lounged on the sand

    I am wondering if my sentences sound natural.

    David lounged on the sand, soaking the morning sun. The beach was silent; the only sound he heard were waves lapping on the shore.

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    Re: David lounged on the sand

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    David lounged on the sand, soaking the morning sun. The beach was silent; the only sound he heard were was the (sound of the) waves lapping on the shore.
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    Re: David lounged on the sand

    He was soaking up​ the sun, not soaking it!
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: David lounged on the sand

    Yes, I missed that one.

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