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    please check grammar and writing style

    Fear of Afghan Nationalism
    Since the partition of the sub-continent Pakistan has lived in fear of ethnic nationalism in Pakistan and Afghan nationalism in Afghanistan. Ethnic nationalism was viewed during the separation of east and west Pakistan, when ethnic groups like Balochs and Pushtuns had been banned in Pakistan.During cold war the leaders of Pushtuns nationalist parties were arrested and propagated as anti-Pakistan. Afghanistan was continuously supporting the Pashtuns separatist where they were in majority. At first, pushtuns who have been living in Pakistan were the supporters of Indian congress. Then, after the creation of Pakistan they had demanded a separate country of Pushtuns. However, after recognizing the value of Pakistan they demanded autonomy under the federation of Pakistan. In Afghan Jihad war Pakistan used Islamist as a bargaining chip to counter Pustunistan policy of Afghanistan. Pan-Islamism was emerged to curb the influence of pushtun nationalism. The ideology of Muslim brotherhood was believed to be won and would undermine the ethnic and nationalistic forces.On the contrary, those who were supposed to be Muslim brothers are now more and more anti-Pakistan.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 14-Mar-2017 at 17:55. Reason: Removed hyperlinks

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    Re: please check grammar and writing style

    Why do all the underlined links lead back to our forum page?

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    Re: please check grammar and writing style

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    Why do all the underlined links lead back to our forum page?
    I don't know sir. I am new member please guide why all these words are appearing as a link?

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    Re: please check grammar and writing style

    Quote Originally Posted by Ali Kazi View Post
    I don't know. sir. I am a new member. Please guide tell me why all these words are appearing as a link?
    See my corrections above. Don't refer to users here as "sir". It's unnecessarily formal and it suggests that you assume everyone here is male.

    I don't know why they were all links. I have edited your post and removed all the hyperlinks and all the formatting.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: please check grammar and writing style

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    See my corrections above. Don't refer to users here as "sir". It's unnecessarily formal and it suggests that you assume everyone here is male.

    I don't know why they were all links. I have edited your post and removed all the hyperlinks and all the formatting.
    Teacher kindly tell me that which type of writings should I write in order to get them checked on this forum. I just want to improve my grammar.

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    #6

    Re: please check grammar and writing style

    I suggest you avoid controversial, political and religious topics.

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