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  1. Bassim
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    #1 16-Mar-2017, 13:56

    When he came out of the water

    This sentence is from a short story I am currently writing. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    When he came out of the water, he looked like a hero from an ancient myth who had returned to humans after visiting the residence of gods.
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    #2 16-Mar-2017, 15:20

    Re: When he came out of the water

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    When he came out of the water, he looked like a hero from an ancient myth, who had returned to humans Earth/this world after visiting the residence home of the gods.
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