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    #1

    As the doctor palpitated David's wound

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

    As the doctor palpitated David's wound, David gave a long, agonising moan.

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    #2

    Re: As the doctor palpitated David's wound

    The verb you need is palpated.

    Say 'agonised' instead of 'agonising'.

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    Re: As the doctor palpitated David's wound

    An agonising moan would be one which is excruciatingly painful to hear. While that is not impossible, "agonized" (American spelling) is more likely here.
    I am not a teacher.

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