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    A married couple...

    Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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    A married couple experience terrifying supernatural occurrences when the husband accidentally brings home a doll belonged to a little girl named Uci who has died along with her family in a brutal robbery.

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    Daniel and Anya are a married couple who are starting a new life in Bandung. After cutting down a tree at his project site where a doll is hanged, Daniel unwittingly brings the doll home to Anya, who is a doll maker and decides to keep it. Soon after, their new home is terrorized by strange happenings and sounds, as the couple soon learns that the doll has been possessed by a child who was murdered with her family in a brutal robbery.

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    Re: A married couple...

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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    A married couple experience terrifying supernatural occurrences when the husband accidentally brings home a doll which belonged to a little girl named Uci who has had died along with her family in a brutal robbery.

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    Daniel and Anya are a married couple who are starting a new life in Bandung. After cutting down a tree at his project site where a doll is hanged, Daniel unwittingly brings the doll home to Anya, who is a doll maker and decides to keep it. Soon after, their new home is terrorized by strange happenings and sounds, as the couple soon learn that the doll has been possessed by had belonged a child who was murdered with her family in a brutal robbery.
    I don't understand the highlighted part. Do you mean "which had a doll hanging from it" instead?

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    Re: A married couple...

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    I don't understand the highlighted part. Do you mean "which had a doll hanging from it" instead?
    Basically, the doll is hanging from a tree. After cutting the tree, the doll has fallen and Daniel brings home.

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    Re: A married couple...

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    After cutting down a tree at his project site, where a doll that was hanging from the tree falls down, is hanged, and Daniel unwittingly brings the doll home to Anya,
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