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    Support with amending my CV

    Curriculum Vitae

    [name]
    [address]
    [contact number]
    [email address]

    Profile

    An exceedingly productive and motivated individual, who has a responsible and caring nature. I have a firm desire to work with people in diverse sociable environments, coinciding with my interpersonal skills and cultural awareness. My communication skills are of distinction and I work constructively on my own initiative as well as part of a team. I have attained understanding and experience performing in highly expeditious surroundings with the ability to act diligently to the service of clientele. I pursue an eminently challenging career role, which can expand my current skill set.

    Professional Experience

    Travelling West Africa: November 2016 – March 2017

    · Morocco, Gambia, Senegal, Mali, Burkina Faso and Ghana

    [company name]Children’s transport and Teaching Assistant: [dates]
    · Working with children aged 4 to 11 years old
    · Transporting and escorting children to and from school
    · Working one to one with individual children
    · Working as part of a team with class teacher and other TA’s
    · Escorting children on trips/days out
    · Supporting children at lunchtimes
    · Encouraging the class to engage with their learning
    · Supporting children in the playground
    · Using different strategies to deal with difficult behaviour
    · Communicating with children’s parents and families

    [company name]Delivery Driver: [dates]
    · Providing good customer service
    · Working as part of a team
    · Supplying orders for customers
    · Carrying out safety checks on vehicles
    · Maintaining health and safety in the work environment
    · Preparing ingredients for food
    · Opening and closing the store

    [company name]Warehouse Operative: [dates]
    · Maintaining a clean and safe working environment
    · Palletising products ready for distribution
    · Assisting co-workers with warehouse duties
    · Assisting with opening and closing the warehouse

    [company name]Labourer: [dates]
    · Maintaining Health and Safety in the work environment
    · Carrying out safety checks on equipment before usage
    · Execute practical means using construction equipment
    · Methodical and effective teamwork at all times

    [company name]Customer Service Assistant: [dates]
    · Assisting and advising customers in store and over the phone
    · Stock checking and taking orders
    · Maintaining specific sections of the shop floor
    · Supporting new staff members
    · Maintaining health and safety in the work environment


    Qualification and Training

    · [college]Music Performance BTEC Level 3
    · [institute] Light Vehicle Maintenance: NVQ Level 3
    · [school]: GCSE’s


    References

    Available on request

  2. teechar's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: Support with amending my CV

    Quote Originally Posted by CLS1990 View Post
    Curriculum Vitae

    [name]
    [address]
    [contact number]
    [email address]

    Profile

    An exceedingly productive and motivated individual, who has a responsible and caring nature. I have a firm desire to work with people in diverse sociable environments, coinciding with my interpersonal skills and cultural awareness. My communication skills are of distinction and I work constructively on my own initiative as well as part of a team. I have attained understanding and experience performing in highly expeditious surroundings with the ability to act diligently to the service of clientele. I pursue an eminently challenging career role, which can expand my current skill set. [Try cutting that down to one or two lines. Employers want to see real substance, not waffle.]

    Professional Experience

    Travelling West Africa: November 2016 – March 2017[What does that mean? Were you working or just holidaying?]

    · Morocco, Gambia, Senegal, Mali, Burkina Faso and Ghana

    [company name]Children’s transport and Teaching Assistant: [dates]
    · Working with children aged 4 to 11 years old
    · Transporting and escorting children to and from school
    · Working one to one with individual children
    · Working as part of a team with class teacher and other TA’s [What did you do?]
    · Escorting children on trips/days out
    · Supporting children at lunchtimes [What does that mean?]
    · Encouraging the class to engage with their learning [What does that mean?]
    · Supporting children in the playground
    · Using different strategies to deal with difficult behaviour
    · Communicating with children’s parents and families

    [company name]Delivery Driver: [dates]
    · Providing good customer service [Waffle]
    · Working as part of a team [Waffle]
    · Supplying orders for customers
    · Carrying out safety checks on vehicles
    · Maintaining health and safety in the work environment
    · Preparing ingredients for food [What does that mean?]
    · Opening and closing the store

    [company name]Warehouse Operative: [dates]
    · Maintaining a clean and safe working environment
    · Palletising products ready for distribution
    · Assisting co-workers with warehouse duties
    · Assisting with opening and closing the warehouse

    [company name]Labourer: [dates]
    · Maintaining Health and Safety in the work environment
    · Carrying out safety checks on equipment before usage
    · Execute practical means using construction equipment [What does that mean?]
    · Methodical and effective teamwork at all times [Waffle]

    [company name]Customer Service Assistant: [dates]
    · Assisting and advising customers in store and over the phone
    · Stock checking and taking orders
    · Maintaining specific sections of the shop floor [How?]
    · Supporting new staff members
    · Maintaining health and safety in the work environment [You've repeatedly mentioned this one.]


    Qualification and Training

    · [college]Music Performance BTEC Level 3 [Year?]
    · [institute] Light Vehicle Maintenance: NVQ Level 3 [Year?]
    · [school]: GCSE’s [Year?]


    References

    Available on request
    I strongly advise you to include as much specific information as possible in your CV.

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