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    Proofreading request

    We would like to thank the reviewer for pointing out this confusing situation about the resolution time of the haemorrhage and for showing our mistake about the resolution time in the Hughes et al.'s study. To clarify the first issue, follow-up periods and clinical course of the patient has been more detailed in ‘Outcome and Follow-up section” as follows and the resolution time of the haemorrhage has been expressed as “at 12th week” instead of “84 days” in the manuscript. Additionally, resolution time reported by Hughes et al. has been corrected as 22 days.
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    Re: Proofreading request

    Quote Originally Posted by canerkara View Post
    We would like to thank the reviewer for pointing out this confusing situation the confusion about the resolution time of the haemorrhage and for showing highlighting our mistake about regarding the resolution time in the Hughes et al. study. To clarify the first issue, follow-up periods and the clinical course of the patient has been are now more detailed in the 'Outcome and Follow-up' section as follows, and the resolution time of the haemorrhage has been expressed as “at the 12th week” instead of “84 days” in the manuscript. Additionally, the resolution time reported by Hughes et al. has been corrected as 22 days.
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