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    As the train trundled through the sunlit countryside

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    As the train trundled through the sunlit countryside, I watched through the window the golden cornfields rippling in the wind like sea waves.

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    Re: As the train trundled through the sunlit countryside

    No mistakes. Perfectly natural. Perhaps a little old-fashioned.

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