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    how to write a payment requirement message

    Hi All,

    Can someone kindly help me to improve below MSM on tuition payment requirement to parents from a training agency? Thanks.


    Dear Mr Lam, here is a friendly reminder about the tutoringfee submission for your son Xiao Lam for month of April 2017. You are expectedto pay it before 10th April, 2017. Thank you in advance.
    Your kindly support is a great motivation for us.
    ABC Training Agency
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 27-Mar-2017 at 08:06.

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    Re: how to write a payment requirement message

    Quote Originally Posted by Lemon2017 View Post
    Hi ​all,

    Can someone kindly help me to improve below the MSM (what is an "MSM"?) below on tuition payment requirements to parents from a training agency? Thanks.


    Dear Mr Lam,

    here This is a friendly reminder about the tutoring (space needed here) fee submission for your son Xiao Lam for the month of April 2017. You are expected (space needed here) to pay it before 10th April, 2017.

    Thank you in advance.

    Your kindly support is a great motivation for us. greatly appreciated.

    ABC Training Agency
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: how to write a payment requirement message

    I have heard of "tuition fees", not "tutoring fees".
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: how to write a payment requirement message

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    See above.
    Thanks for your help.
    It should be SMS rather than MSM.

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    Re: how to write a payment requirement message

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    I have heard of "tuition fees", not "tutoring fees".

    Yes
    you are right, thanks to point it out.

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    Re: how to write a payment requirement message

    Quote Originally Posted by Lemon2017 View Post
    Yes, you are right. Thanks for pointing it out.
    That was a lazy effort, Lemon.

    Have you spotted the 'Thank' button in the bottom left-hand corner of every post? Clicking on this means you don't have to write 'thank you' messages.

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