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  1. Nikitus's Avatar
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    #1

    You can't show this video to Kevin!

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


    -You can't show this video to Kevin! If he sees it, he will never forgive me.


    -Ok. Kevin will never know about this video… if you help me


    Thanks.

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    #2

    Re: You can't show this video to Kevin!

    The first line specifically demands that Kevin never see the video. The reply only mentions his knowing about it. They're not quite the same. I would make the idea agree in the two sentences.

    It's "OK" or "Okay" at the start of a sentence, but not "Ok".
    You need a space before the ellipsis.
    You need a full stop after "help me".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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