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    #1

    The old man sat on a bench

    I am wondering if my sentences sound natural.

    The old man sat on a bench, his chin propped on his gnarled hands holding the walking stick in front of him. His bleary eyes looked somewhere in the distance.

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    #2

    Re: The old man sat on a bench

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    looked somewhere in the distance.
    Use "looked into the distance."

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