dhruva101
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- Jan 16, 2006
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- Hindi
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- India
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- United States
Hello teachers,
In future, there can be an opportunity in our organization for promotions as well as switching positions from one area to another. Considering this opportunity I would like to meet few people to market myself. I am planning to be concise while expressing my interest on certain positions. I also would like to structure discussion in conversation style so that it will be more interactive.
I will start with a question and then I present my elevator speech. Can you please review and correct as needed?
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Hi Bebo,
Can you please let me know the process for the next round of placements?
Once I get the answer, then I will express my interest (elevator speech) with supporting information as follows.
Thank you! I want to let you know that I am interested to continue/join your organization since I have been working/have worked in the organization for a while. I have the technical knowledge of this area and also I have developed relationships with the people in this organization.
Although I am not sure how many senior level positions are available, I am interested in taking up higher responsibilities. In fact, as you know, I have been handling those higher responsibilities in my current assignment.
In my current assignment, I have been working/presenting status at times directly with/to the director. Also, as you know, influencing and changing current diversified users behavior is critical for the success of this assignment. I have been developing different communication strategies with the support of other leads to get their alignment. This assignment is not really organized and several loose ends are there. I am working to separate knowns vs unknowns so that we can move forward on knowns while continue to work on unknowns to bring light into unknowns.
<I have more supporting material to discuss if there are any questions. If not, then I would like to end with the following sentence.>
Bebo, Thank you for the conversation. I believe I will get an opportunity to move up in the ladder. I look forward to working with you for a long time.
Thank you !
Dhruva.
In future, there can be an opportunity in our organization for promotions as well as switching positions from one area to another. Considering this opportunity I would like to meet few people to market myself. I am planning to be concise while expressing my interest on certain positions. I also would like to structure discussion in conversation style so that it will be more interactive.
I will start with a question and then I present my elevator speech. Can you please review and correct as needed?
=================================================
Hi Bebo,
Can you please let me know the process for the next round of placements?
Once I get the answer, then I will express my interest (elevator speech) with supporting information as follows.
Thank you! I want to let you know that I am interested to continue/join your organization since I have been working/have worked in the organization for a while. I have the technical knowledge of this area and also I have developed relationships with the people in this organization.
Although I am not sure how many senior level positions are available, I am interested in taking up higher responsibilities. In fact, as you know, I have been handling those higher responsibilities in my current assignment.
In my current assignment, I have been working/presenting status at times directly with/to the director. Also, as you know, influencing and changing current diversified users behavior is critical for the success of this assignment. I have been developing different communication strategies with the support of other leads to get their alignment. This assignment is not really organized and several loose ends are there. I am working to separate knowns vs unknowns so that we can move forward on knowns while continue to work on unknowns to bring light into unknowns.
<I have more supporting material to discuss if there are any questions. If not, then I would like to end with the following sentence.>
Bebo, Thank you for the conversation. I believe I will get an opportunity to move up in the ladder. I look forward to working with you for a long time.
Thank you !
Dhruva.