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    A shred of happiness

    I have tried to use "a shred of happiness" in my sentence. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    After Martin's wife died, he couldn't find a shred of happiness in life.

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    Re: A shred of happiness

    Use "in his life".

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    #3

    Re: A shred of happiness

    Thank you teechar,

    I believed, apparently wrongly, that I could omit "his"in my sentence.

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    Re: A shred of happiness

    I prefer it with "his".

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    #5

    Re: A shred of happiness

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    I prefer it with "his".
    With all respect, I prefer Bassim's original version. It is what I as a native speaker would say.

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