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    When the financial situation

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

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    When the financial situation of his family gets difficult, a carefree young man, Jomon reveals a much different side of himself.

    Long summary
    Vincent is a business tycoon in Thrissur city. All his children are well-settled except for Jomon, his proverbial prodigal son, whom all accuses of being incessantly irresponsible. One day, Vincent business move falters, his family finds a financial crisis where he loses his home and wealth. While all his other children make it clear that they want no part in his struggle, Jomon steps in and takes his father under his wing. Can he manage to solve the financial crisis alone?

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    Re: When the financial situation

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    Short summary
    When the financial situation of his family gets difficult, a carefree young man, Jomon reveals a much different side of himself.

    Long summary
    Vincent is a business tycoon in Thrissur City. All his children are well settled, except for Jomon, his proverbial prodigal son, whom all accuse of being incessantly always irresponsible. One day, a business decision by Vincent backfires, and business move falters, his family finds faces a financial crisis where he loses his home and wealth. While all his other children make it clear that they want no part in his struggle, Jomon steps in and takes his father under his wing. Can he manage to solve the financial crisis alone?
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