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    #1

    There were so much sniping and backstabbing in the party

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

    There were so much sniping and backstabbing in the party that in the end it imploded and split in two.

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    #2

    Re: There were so much sniping and backstabbing in the party

    Write There was so much sniping etc. "Imploded" ("rapidly and violently collapsed into iself") contradicts "split in two".
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    #3

    Re: There were so much sniping and backstabbing in the party

    Would me sentence be correct like this:

    There was so much sniping and backstabbing in the party that in the end it broke down in two.

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    #4

    Re: There were so much sniping and backstabbing in the party

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    Would my sentence be correct like this?

    There was so much sniping and backstabbing in the party that, in the end, it broke down split into two parties.
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    #5

    Re: There were so much sniping and backstabbing in the party

    If I delete "parties" would my sentence be correct like this?

    There was so much sniping and backstabbing in the party that, in the end, it split into two.

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    #6

    Re: There were so much sniping and backstabbing in the party

    The usual expression is it split in two.​ With that amendment your sentence is fine.
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