There were so much sniping and backstabbing in the party

**Bassim** · 31-Mar-2017, 21:24

I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

There were so much sniping and backstabbing in the party that in the end it imploded and split in two.

**GoesStation** · 31-Mar-2017, 21:34

Write There was so much sniping etc. "Imploded" ("rapidly and violently collapsed into iself") contradicts "split in two".

**Bassim** · 31-Mar-2017, 21:44

Would me sentence be correct like this:

There was so much sniping and backstabbing in the party that in the end it broke down in two.

**teechar** · 31-Mar-2017, 21:51

Originally Posted by Bassim

Would my sentence be correct like this?

There was so much sniping and backstabbing in the party that, in the end, it ~~broke down~~ split into two parties.

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**Bassim** · 31-Mar-2017, 21:54

If I delete "parties" would my sentence be correct like this?

There was so much sniping and backstabbing in the party that, in the end, it split into two.

**GoesStation** · 31-Mar-2017, 22:03

The usual expression is it split in two. With that amendment your sentence is fine.

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