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I am wondering if my sentences sound natural.
The morning after a drinking spree, John had a terrible headache. His mouth was parched and dry, and his stomach growled.
Take out "and dry"; it's repetitious.
Last edited by Rover_KE; 01-Apr-2017 at 12:52. Reason: Adding 'and'.
Is a growling stomach a consequence of drinking too much?
Post hic?
Post pub?
Ante vomitus?
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
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