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#1 31-Mar-2017, 23:30The morning after a drinking spree
I am wondering if my sentences sound natural.
The morning after a drinking spree, John had a terrible headache. His mouth was parched and dry, and his stomach growled.
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#3 01-Apr-2017, 12:39Re: The morning after a drinking spree
Take out "and dry"; it's repetitious.
Last edited by Rover_KE; 01-Apr-2017 at 12:52. Reason: Adding 'and'.
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#4 01-Apr-2017, 18:22Re: The morning after a drinking spree
Is a growling stomach a consequence of drinking too much?
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#5 01-Apr-2017, 19:39Re: The morning after a drinking spree
Post hoc, ergo propter hoc?
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#6 01-Apr-2017, 20:15Re: The morning after a drinking spree
Post hic?
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#7 02-Apr-2017, 15:46Re: The morning after a drinking spree
Post pub?
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#8 03-Apr-2017, 11:30Re: The morning after a drinking spree
Ante vomitus?
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