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    When David became middle-aged

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

    When David became middle-aged, he complained that his parents fussed over him too much and didn't prepare him for the reality of life.

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    Re: When David became middle-aged

    ...his parents had fussed over him too much and hadn't prepared him...

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    Re: When David became middle-aged

    When David reached middle age, ...
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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