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    #1

    Peter entered the nightclub

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    Peter entered the nightclub and stood for a while, his prowling eyes searching for someone to spend the night with.

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    Re: Peter entered the nightclub

    It's OK.
    I am not a teacher.

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