Kutram 23 (a Tamil movie)

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Hi, can someone check my writing please, thanks in advance.

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When a priest is found dead at the church and the disappearance of a pregnant woman, Vetri, a young and dedicated Assistant Commissioner of Police in Chennai steps in to get at the truth. During his investigation, Vetri finds a hidden medical crime happening in the name of artificial insemination that a lot of pregnant women are continuously committing suicide. Who is the mastermind? Can Vetrimaaran crack down this complex case?

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Vetri, a dedicated Cop in Chennai investigates a case involving a murder of a church priest and the disappearance of a pregnant woman but on an unexpected turn, some other hidden truth reveals.
 
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Re: Vetri, a dedicated Cop...

Would you mind giving your comments on post #11 in this thread?
 
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Re: Vetri, a dedicated Cop...

And please do what I asked in post #9 of that thread.
 

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Re: Vetri, a dedicated Cop...

Thanks for swapping the long and short summaries round. It's much easier to deal with. However, I still can't see the title of the film in post #1.
 

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Re: Vetri, a dedicated Cop...

Thanks for swapping the long and short summaries round. It's much easier to deal with. However, I still can't see the title of the film in post #1.

How do I supposed to edit the thread title? Can you guide me, please?

This is Tamil movie and title name is Kutram 23
 

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Re: Vetri, a dedicated Cop...

You can't edit the thread title, Gaya.

I've done it for you, but I can only do it in the original post.

You'll know what to do next time.:-D
 

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Re: Vetri, a dedicated Cop...

How do I supposed to edit the thread title? Can you guide me, please?

This is Tamil movie and title name is Kutram 23

You didn't need to edit the thread title (though it's great that it has been done for you this time) - you could just have added "Here are my short and long summaries of the film "Kutram 23" in the body of the post.

From now on, I suggest you use the title: "[Name of film] - long and short summaries".
 

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Hi, can someone check my writing please, thanks in advance.

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When a priest is found dead at the church and [STRIKE]the disappearance of[/STRIKE] a pregnant woman, Vetri, disappears, a young and dedicated Assistant Commissioner of Police in Chennai steps in to get at the truth. During his investigation, Vetri [STRIKE]finds a hidden[/STRIKE] uncovers a medical crime happening in the name of artificial insemination, [STRIKE]that a lot of[/STRIKE] which is leading to many pregnant women [STRIKE]are continuously[/STRIKE] committing suicide. Who is the mastermind? Can Vetrimaaran crack [STRIKE]down[/STRIKE] this complex case?

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Vetri, a dedicated Cop in Chennai investigates a case involving a murder of a [STRIKE]church[/STRIKE] (parish) priest and the disappearance of a pregnant woman but [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] by an unexpected turn, some other hidden truth is revealed.
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I think you got the wrong understanding in the first line, teechar. Vetri is being handled by this case. Vetri is not the vanished girl.

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When a priest is found dead at the church and a pregnant woman disappearance, Vetrimaaran, a young and dedicated Assistant Commissioner of Police in Chennai steps in to get at the truth. During his investigation, Vetri uncovers a medical crime happening in the name of artificial insemination, which is leading to many pregnant women committing suicide. Who is the mastermind behind all this disaster? Can Vetri crack this complex case?
 

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I think you got the wrong understanding in the first line, teechar. Vetri is [STRIKE]being handled by[/STRIKE] the police officer handling this case. Vetri is not the vanished girl.

Amended as below:
When a priest is found dead at the church and a pregnant woman disappears, [STRIKE]ance,[/STRIKE] Vetrimaaran, a young and dedicated Assistant Commissioner of Police in Chennai, steps in to get at the truth. During his investigation, Vetri uncovers a medical crime happening in the name of artificial insemination, which is leading to many pregnant women committing suicide. Who is the mastermind behind all this disaster? Can Vetri crack this complex case?
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