[Grammar] Coal has been used as a heating device ...

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Coal has been used as a heating device since ancient times.It is a solid fossil fuel
-Coal, which is a solid fossil fuel, has been used as a heating device since ancient times
Is this reduction correct?: Coal, a solid fossil fuel, has been used as a heating device since ancient times
 

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Re: reduction of relative clause

It's fine, but check the punctuation at the end.
 

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Re: reduction of relative clause

I'm not sure you can call coal a device.

You have a bad habit of failing to end every sentence with a punctuation mark. I hope you insist that your students do so.

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On the single occasion that you did remember to use a full stop in post 1, you failed to put a space after it.
 

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I'd change 'a heating device' to 'fuel'.
 

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Thank you but can you offer another word for this as 'fuel' is used twice in that way?
a means of heating could be approppriate?
 

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"Coal has been used for heating, etc."
 

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These are the alternatives I have found with your help.Now can you please tell me which one is the most appropriate?
-Coal, which is a solid fossil fuel, has been used as a good energy source since ancient times
-Coal, which is a solid fossil fuel, has been used as a means of heating since ancient times
-Coal, which is a solid fossil fuel, has been used for heating since ancient times
-Coal, which is a solid fossil fuel, has been used as a heat source since ancient times
 
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These are the alternatives I have found with your help.Now can you please tell me which one is the most appropriate?

Please be sure to put spaces between sentences.
 

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These are the alternatives I have found with your help.Now can you please tell me which one is the most appropriate?
-Coal, which is a solid fossil fuel, has been used as a good energy source since ancient times
-Coal, which is a solid fossil fuel, has been used as a means of heating since ancient times
-Coal, which is a solid fossil fuel, has been used for heating since ancient times
-Coal, which is a solid fossil fuel, has been used as a heat source since ancient times

 

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They are all appropriate.

Now insert a punctuation mark at the end of every sentence.
 
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