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    Hi! I would be grateful if you couls check these paragraphs. Thanks in advance!

    The second part provides detailed information on the conveyed research. 150 respondents who represent equal groups basing on the criteria of gender and age filled in the questionnaire. The results of the research consisting of three main analysis: correlation, descriminant and claster proved the existence of accelerating and complicated society too opaque to be studied with the help of traditional sociological theories. What has to be pointed out is that social networks have embraced people from all over the world which despite the dispersion allows them to maintain social contacts. Up-to-the-minute gadgets give an opportunity to stay online whenever a person feels the urge to or whatever they do to sustain the existing relationships or establish the new ones. What is more, people become absorbed by the communicational whirlpool which presupposes adaptation to the Internet rules and norms the majority of which are transmitted and spread in the real life. Moreover, the research revealed that hardly do exist those who donít have anonymous accounts which they use to express their thoughts more freely. Beyond what has been stated, the Internet users usually have to double-check the content they get as not only fake but also insulting information can be found. Of no importance might it seem at first sight but self-identity is being crippled by numerous contacts and the necessity to construct a portrait in social networks according to which friends will treat a person in real life. Becoming less profound the very term of personality might be outshone by simulacra, symbols and signs.

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    Re: text check

    Hello Sophia, and welcome to the forum.

    Quote Originally Posted by Sophia_pumpkin View Post
    Hi! I would be grateful if you could check these paragraphs. Thanks in advance!

    The second part provides detailed information on the conveyed research. 150 One hundred and fifty respondents who representing equal numbers from all the age groups and both genders basing on the criteria of gender and age filled in the questionnaire. The results of the research consisting of three main analysis: correlation, descriminant and claster proved the existence of accelerating and complicated society, too opaque to be studied with the help of traditional sociological theories. What has to be pointed out is that social networks have embraced people from all over the world which, despite the separation, dispersion allows them to maintain social contact. Up-to-the-minute gadgets give Advanced technology provides an opportunity to stay online whenever a person feels the urge need to or whatever they do to sustain the existing relationships or establish the new ones. What is more, people have become absorbed by the communication whirlpool which presupposes adaptation to the Internet rules and norms, the majority of which are transmitted and spread in the real life. Moreover, the research revealed that there are hardly do exist those any people who donít have anonymous accounts which they use to express their thoughts more freely. Beyond what has been stated, the Internet users usually have to double-check the content they get as not only fake for authenticity, but also insulting information can be found. This Of no importance might not it seem important at first sight but self-identity is being crippled by having numerous contacts and the necessity to construct a portrait in social networks according to which friends will treat a person in real life. Becoming less profound important, the very term of personality might be outshone by simulacra, symbols and signs.
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