I did not understand your first body paragraph, so I did not bother correcting it.Dear Teachers,
Below is an essay I wrote tofor mypractise my writing skills.
Could you please help me correct it?
Thank you!
It is true that vaccinesis one ofare amongst the greatest discoveriesinventionin medicine.ItVaccination has protectedmany peoplecountless millions from diseases which are often fatal.during the human history.Almost every childwasborn todaywasgets immunized by the use of vaccines against a variety of common diseases. However,making a law to askhaving legislation which obliges peopleuseto get vaccinatedesis not a good idea. From my point of view, vaccination is a personal choice and it should be left up to the individual to make that choice.an option rather than an obligation.
Firstly, there are many kinds of vaccine are being used so far. New vaccines will be discovered more and more in the future. So it is very difficult to ask people to use all the kinds of vaccine. It is reasonable to ask people immunize some basic vaccines. However, those vaccines only apply to against popular diseases which can be treated easily by modern medicine. For example, chickenpox is a disease which happen once in a life of person, and it is easy to get rid of it with proper treatment.
Another point, I would liketo consider is that the useingof vaccines isan option because it isnot always safe for every individual.human. Everyone has a different heath status,and a differentSome people may have an adverse, and in some cases life-threatening, reaction to a particular vaccine.Some people got sick after injecting vaccine. Even some cases have been reported to die due to vaccine yearly.Ifwe givevaccines are optional,as a choicethe doctors will check the heath status of, and suitability of a vaccine for, a patienthim or herbefore administering the vaccine.he decide to take medicine or not.This is definitely safer thantakingmaking vaccines mandatory for everyone.as an obligation.
The last point isFinally, the price of some vaccines is very high and, therefore, beyond the means of many, especially the poor. It would, thus, be better to have it as an option for people if they can afford it.for some diseases. It is not a good solution to have a law to ask poor people taking those vaccines.
In conclusion, it is a good idea to encourage people to gettakingvaccinated.es.However, it is important to leave it up to thelet'sindividual tohave the rightto choose.the way that they want to protect themselves.

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