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    #1

    Kelly walked in the subway car. She looked at Kevin

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Kelly walked in the subway car. She looked at Kevin, and stopped a few feet from him. Kevin was standing alone, far from other people, and strongly grabbing the handles of the subway car, looking sideways and backwards repeatedly. Kelly approached to Kevin."

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    #2

    Re: Kelly walked in the subway car. She looked at Kevin

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Kelly walked in through the subway car.
    or

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Kelly walked in got on the subway (car).
    Those don't mean the same thing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    She looked at Kevin and stopped a few feet from him. Kevin was standing alone, far from other people, and strongly grabbing firmly holding the handrails, les of the subway car, looking sideways and backwards repeatedly. Kelly approached to Kevin."

    Thanks.

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    Re: Kelly walked in the subway car. She looked at Kevin

    strongly grabbing tightly gripping

    Kelly approached to Kevin him.

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