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    I climbed out of the ditch

    This sentence is from a short story I am currently writing. I am not sure about the place of "on all fours"in my sentence. Would you please correct the mistakes?

    I climbed out of the ditch on all fours onto the soft shoulder.

    Or should be instead like this:

    I climbed out of the ditch onto the soft shoulder on all fours.

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    Re: I climbed out of the ditch

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I climbed out of the ditch, on all fours, onto the soft shoulder.
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    Re: I climbed out of the ditch

    Instead of the combination of "climbed" and "on all fours" you could just say "I crawled out of the ditch onto the soft shoulder".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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