Letter of recomendation

[Tatiana_]

With seven years of experience in publishing, bookselling and organising fairs, cultural events and promotional art concepts, Natasha has developed strong organizational capabilities. Mentioned skills assist in monitoring the production of each product separately, in monitoring the quality of the product and its packaging, and also provide positive cooperation with a variety of partners involved in the production process. She manages to impose a responsible approach to work, and her education in the field of literature and specialization in culture of studies also contribute to the quality of the prototype that participate in the process of finalizing it.

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[teechar]

Hello Tatiana, and welcome to the forum.

With seven years' [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] experience in publishing, bookselling and organising fairs, cultural events and promotional art concepts, Natasha has developed strong organizational capabilities. [STRIKE]Mentioned skills assist[/STRIKE] She is highly competent in [STRIKE]monitoring[/STRIKE] supervising the production of each product separately, [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] monitoring the quality of the product and its packaging, and also [STRIKE]provide positive cooperation[/STRIKE] in liaising with a variety of partners involved in the production process. She [STRIKE]manages to impose[/STRIKE] takes a responsible approach to work, and her education in the field of literature and specialization in culture of studies also contribute to the quality of the prototype that participate in the process of finalizing it.

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