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  1. Newbie
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      • Chinese
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      • China
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      • New Zealand

    • Join Date: Mar 2017
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    #1

    Smile could you help me to correct the explanation email

    Dear Teachers,
    I am currently applying for a job through a recruiter. He questions my working experience and thinks I am not qualified for this job. I really want this job because it is a fantastic opportunity for me. Now I write an email to him to discuss the details of my working ability.

    Dear xxx,

    Thank you so much for taking your time to speak with me. I enjoyed my time with you, and I feel that the position would be a great opportunity for me.

    After reading the advertisement which you have posted in seek, I feel I am confident to take this role and will provide a good accounting service to the clients.

    As a Chinses who lived in B country with almost four years accounting working experience, I know Chinese culture and B country's tax system very well and can communicate with mandarin without any difficulties.

    I have dealt with many different cases from small business, sole trader and partnership to medium size company which had a turnover more than $xxx and has more than xx employees. I provided tax advice to clients based on the business situation as well.

    I treat clients with enthusiasm and patience. My colleagues and clients describe me as a friendly, energetic and conscientious person who works hard and pays attention to all details.

    As the first accountant in our firm, I am also responsible for training the junior and internship students. I double check their works, monitor the processing of all work step and point out the mistake they have made. I have trained more than 10 internship students and one of them have become junior accountants of our company and others also gain a lot of knowledge from training and found a satisfying job. I still hang out with them from time to time.

    I wanted to take the time to reassure you that I believe my sense of initiative, high level of motivation, and positive attitude make me a prime candidate for this position. I'm not sure if that came across during the interview.

    If you would like to arrange another time to meet, I would appreciate the opportunity to speak with you again.

    Sincerely,

    xxx

  2. teechar's Avatar
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    English Teacher
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      • English
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      • Iraq
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      • Iraq

    • Join Date: Feb 2015
    • Posts: 9,201
    #2

    Re: could you help me to correct the explanation email

    Quote Originally Posted by Jodyjobseeker View Post
    Dear Teachers,
    I am currently applying for a job through a recruiter. He questions my working experience and thinks I am not qualified for this job. I really want this job because it is a fantastic opportunity for me. Now I want to write an email to him to discuss the details of my working ability.

    Dear xxx,

    Thank you so much for taking your time to speak with me. I enjoyed our conversation, my time with you, and I feel that the position in question would be a great opportunity for me.

    After reading the advertisement which you have posted on Seek, I feel I am confident to take on this role and will provide a good accounting service to the clients.

    As a Chinese person who lived in B, country and with almost four years' professional accounting working experience, I know Chinese culture and B's country's tax system very well, and of course I can communicate with fluently in Mandarin, as I am a native speaker of it. without any difficulties.

    I have dealt with many different cases from clients, including small businesses, sole traders and partnerships as well as to medium-size companies which had a turnover of more than $xxx and has more than xx employees. I provided tax advice to clients based on their specific business situation. as well.

    I treat clients with enthusiasm and patience. My colleagues and clients describe me as a friendly, energetic and conscientious person who works hard and pays attention to all details.

    As the first accountant in our firm, I am also responsible for training the junior and internship students. I double check their work, monitor the processing of all work step figures and point out the any mistakes they have made. I have trained more than 10 internship students, and one of them have has become a junior accountant of in our company, and the others also gained a lot of valuable knowledge from the training and went on to find good jobs. found a satisfying job. I still hang out keep in touch with them, and we meet up from time to time.

    I wanted to take the time wish to reassure you that I believe my sense of initiative, high level of motivation, and positive attitude make me a prime candidate for this position. I'm not sure if I hope that came across during the interview.

    If you would like to arrange another time to meet, I would appreciate the opportunity to speak with you again.

    Sincerely,

    xxx
    If you still live in B, say "has lived in B for the last x years."

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