Yes. It's incoherent.

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Player X will train from 20th of June to 17th of September within a tennis professional surrounding and modern tennis facilities in our Tennis academy.
Sounds somehow strange, doest it?
Last edited by emsr2d2; 29-Apr-2017 at 08:50. Reason: Fixed typo (repetition of "at")
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
I would capitalize "Academy."
I woud use intitial capitals for neither tennis nor academy, unless that Tennis Academy were the name of the establishmen.
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