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  1. davetherave
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    #1 28-Apr-2017, 10:24

    Invitation letter sentence

    Player X will train from 20th of June to 17th of September within a tennis professional surrounding and modern tennis facilities in our Tennis academy.

    Sounds somehow strange, doest it?
  3. GoesStation
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    #2 28-Apr-2017, 13:14

    Re: Invitation letter sentence

    Yes. It's incoherent.
    I am not a teacher.
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    #3 28-Apr-2017, 16:28

    Re: Invitation letter sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by davetherave View Post
    Player X will train from 20th of June to 17th of September within a in professional tennis professional surroundings and at modern tennis facilities in our modern tennis academy.

    It sounds somehow strange, doesn't it?
    See above.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 29-Apr-2017 at 08:50. Reason: Fixed typo (repetition of "at")
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
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    #4 29-Apr-2017, 08:33

    Re: Invitation letter sentence

    I would capitalize "Academy."
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    #5 29-Apr-2017, 08:48

    Re: Invitation letter sentence

    I woud use intitial capitals for neither tennis nor academy, unless that Tennis Academy were the name of the establishmen.
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