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    #1

    Diana was taking selfies

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    Diana was taking selfies on the beach, indifferent of other people, who gaped at her attractive figure.

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    #2

    Re: Diana was taking selfies

    I'd say 'indifferent to other people'.

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    #3

    Re: Diana was taking selfies

    Her figure should be more than merely attractive to provoke gaping.
    I am not a teacher.

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    #4

    Re: Diana was taking selfies

    Perhaps:

    Diana, wearing a teeny tiny bikini, was taking selfies on the beach and ignoring those who chose to stare.

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    #5

    Re: Diana was taking selfies

    I consider "indifferent of" incorrect in the above.

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