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    #1

    All of a sudden bell rings and school is over.

    The film starts with the shot of a teacher teaching the students at school. She is being nice to the kids. All of a sudden bell rings and school is over. Kids leave for a long weekend.

    Please check my sentences.

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    #2

    Re: All of a sudden bell rings and school is over.

    Use "the bell" and "the kids."

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    #3

    Re: All of a sudden bell rings and school is over.

    Also "a shot" unless you have previously discussed the scene.
    I am not a teacher.

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