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    Benefits of water

    There is no doubt that water is very important and necessary for our life. In other words, water is life. It is a gift from allah which we must keep. It is more precious than any thing in the universe. No one can live without it.

    Man and al other living things need water to stay a live water makes our bodies work. Plants also need water to grow people use water for drinking, cooking and growing cpops. For good health,you need about two litres of water daily. We can live without food for a few days, but not without water.

    Water is very necessary for most of parts of the body. Water washes the kindneys. It is very useful for our body. We should drink much water daily.

    We should drink a lot of water to be healthy. We should drink water after getting up because it is very useful for our body. Water lessens salt and poisons in our body.

    Doctors advise people to drink a lot of water during the day and before sleep especially to avoid clots. In fact, water is very in necessary for ou existence it is very necessary to human beings and all other living things.

    In conclusion, no one can deny that water is very essential in our life. It is a gift from our God which we most save. We shouldn't leave taps open. We also shouldn't pollute water we shouldn't throw rubbish in rivers and seas we should keep it clean and save it as possible as we can. Every one of us should be careful about water and keep every drop from falling carelessly. Our children should be taught how to use it carefully and how to save it.
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    Re: Benefits of water

    Hello Turki, and welcome to the forum.

    Quote Originally Posted by Turki Mohammed View Post
    There is no doubt that water is very important and necessary for our life. In other words, water is life. It is a gift from allah which we must keep. It is more precious than any thing in the universe. No one can live without it.

    Man and al other living things need water to stay a live water makes our bodies work. Plants also need water to grow people use water for drinking, cooking and growing cpops. For good health,you need about two litres of water daily. We can live without food for a few days, but not without water.

    Water is very necessary for most of parts of the body. Water washes the kindneys. It is very useful for our body. We should drink much water daily.


    We should drink a lot of water to be healthy. We should drink water after getting up because it is very useful for our body. Water lessens salt and poisons in our body.

    Doctors advise people to drink a lot of water during the day and before sleep especially to avoid clots. In fact, water is very in necessary for ou existence it is very necessary to human beings and all other living things.


    In conclusion, no one can deny that water is very essential in our life. It is a gift from our God which we most save. We shouldn't leave taps open. We also shouldn't pollute water we shouldn't throw rubbish in rivers and seas we should keep it clean and save it as possible as we can. Every one of us should be careful about water and keep every drop from falling carelessly. Our children should be taught how to use it carefully and how to save it.
    I've highlighted some problem areas in your text. Try to fix them, and post the passage again.
    Also, there's a lot of repetition in your text.

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    Re: Benefits of water

    You could say that water is necessary for life.

    Be sure to capitalize Allah.

    You could say we can't live without it (water).

    I don't know what you mean by "It's a gift from Allah which we must keep".

    You don't need to say the same thing a dozen times.

    The word "alive" is one word.

    Work on your punctuation.

    Try:

    The kidneys use water to flush waste products from the body.

    I wouldn't use "In conclusion" if I were you.

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