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    please correct this extract of my cover letter

    As as a student with a Bachelorís in applied communications major, I am particular interested in the world of social media and what impact it has on our society.

    Furthermore, I am very passionate about the European health care policy and would be eager to learn more about what the dynamics are between the different EU institutions and public health related areas, something that I could already get acquainted with during internships and my studies. This, however, represents nonetheless a field in which I still wish to gain more expertise and insight.

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    Re: please correct this extract of my cover letter

    Quote Originally Posted by havfru View Post
    As as a student With my bachelorís in applied communications, major, I am particularly interested in the world of social media and what impact it has on our society.

    Furthermore, I am very passionate about the European healthcare policy and would be eager to learn more about what the dynamics are between the different EU institutions and various aspects of public health, related areas, something that I could already get acquainted with during internships and my studies. This , however, represents nonetheless a field in which I still wish to gain more expertise and insight.
    I don't understand the part in blue.

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