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    #1

    Kimberly walked to Tim's house. She noticed Sue outside

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Kimberly walked to Tim's house. She noticed Sue outside Tim's apartment, walking impatiently, waiting for him."

    Thanks.

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    Re: Kimberly walked to Tim's house. She noticed Sue outside

    Yes.

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    Re: Kimberly walked to Tim's house. She noticed Sue outside

    I'd probably use "pacing impatiently". Walking suggests that she is going from A to B, rather than what she is probably doing which is taking a few steps one way, then the other, backwards and forwards.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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