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    There was a beautiful water fountain where the crowd gathered around.

    Hi,
    What would be your choice in these three sentences? And why?

    There was a beautiful water fountain around which the crowd gathered.
    There was a beautiful water fountain where the crowd gathered around.
    There was a beautiful water fountain where the crowd gathered.
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    Re: There was a beautiful water fountain where the crowd gathered around.

    Quote Originally Posted by ambitious-girl View Post
    Hi,
    What would be your choice in these three sentences? And why?

    There was a beautiful water fountain around which the crowd gathered.
    There was a beautiful water fountain where the crowd gathered around.
    There was a beautiful water fountain where the crowd gathered.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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