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    Grammar check

    I would like to ask you to check the grammar in this text. :)

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    Sex in the City is a romantic comedy from 2008 sequel to Sex in the City filmed according to a book about four friends (Carrie, Samantha, Charlotte and Miranda) living in New York City.
    The story takes place in New York, where Carrie buys an apartment with her boyfriend and gets engaged.
    Steve deceives Miranda, Samantha breaks with Smith and Charlotte gets pregnant. On the wedding day, Carrie boyfriend left her. Carrie leaves with her friends for the honeymoon vacation where she was supposed to go with her boyfriend. After a few months, Charlotte begins to give birth and Carrie boyfriend takes her to the hospital. At the hospital, Carrie meets her ex-fiance, which she supposed to marry and fall in love with him again. The film ends when they are married.
    I like this move very much. The story shows the typical life of New York women. The story is romantic with lots of fun scenes.
    I would rather recommend the film to people who are interested in non-stereotypical life and people who love romantic comedies.
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    Thanks.. :) :)

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    Re: Grammar check

    Welcome to the forum.

    What are you going to do with this piece of writing once it's been corrected?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Grammar check

    It's a text for something like a movie database. But I do not need just a text correction, but also an explanation of every correction you make so I can learn from my faults. :)

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    Re: Grammar check

    Quote Originally Posted by Nartelian View Post
    Sex in and the City is a romantic comedy from 2008 and is the sequel to the TV series by the same name. Sex in the City filmed according to a book It is about four friends (Carrie, Samantha, Charlotte and Miranda) living in New York City.
    The story takes place in New York, where Carrie buys an apartment with her boyfriend and they get engaged.

    Steve deceives Miranda, Samantha breaks it off with Smith and Charlotte gets pregnant. On their wedding day, Carrie's boyfriend left leaves her. Carrie leaves with her friends for the honeymoon vacation where she was supposed to go with her boyfriend. After a few months, Charlotte begins to give birth goes into labour and Carrie's boyfriend takes her to the hospital. At the hospital, Carrie meets her ex-fiance, which whom she was supposed to marry and falls in love with him again. The film ends when they are get married.

    I like this move very much. The story shows the typical life of New York women. The story is romantic with lots of fun scenes.
    I would rather recommend the film to people who are interested in non-stereotypical life and people who love romantic comedies.

    Thanks.
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