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    #1

    The doctor looked at the little girl

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Is it correct with a comma after "girl"?

    The doctor looked at the little girl, whose eyes were clouded over with confusion and anguish.

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    Re: The doctor looked at the little girl

    It's fine.

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