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    Sport

    Every one dreams of being happy and healthy . This dream needs lots of things to do such as having a healthy life style . Sport is one of the most important things that help people to be healthy and happy .

    Sport is an activity that is managed by a set of roles .

    Sport is very important for the body :-
    It strengthen the muscles and bones .
    It increases the flexibility of the body .
    It increases blood flow so it's good for heart and lungs .
    It teaches patience and endurance and controls the body weight .
    It protects the body from bad diseases such as diabetes , blood pressure _ tension and obesity and reduces the risk of heart diseases .

    Lock of exercise make the muscles in the case of laxity and weakness . It makes you in danger and you may develop some dangerous diseases . Exercise every day , eat well , sleep well and you will lead a happy and healthy life .

    Can you correct my essay ?

    my name is : Ayman mansur
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    Re: Sport

    Hello Ayman, and welcome to the forum.

    Quote Originally Posted by Ayman_ View Post
    Every one dreams of being happy and healthy. However, to achieve this dream, one needs lots of things to do such as having to adopt a healthy lifestyle. Sport is one of the most important things that help people to be healthy and happy. Sport is an activity that offers several benefits is managed by a set of roles .Sport and is very important for the body.

    Firstly, i
    t strengthens the muscles and the bones. Moreover, it increases the flexibility of the body. Sport also It increases blood flow improves circulation, so it's good for the heart and lungs. It In fact, sport teaches patience and endurance and controls the body weight. It also protects the body from bad serious diseases such as diabetes, high blood pressure, tension and obesity and reduces the risk of heart disease.

    On the other hand, lack of exercise makes the muscles in the case of laxity and weak. ness . It makes can put your health in danger and you may develop some dangerous diseases.

    To sum up, exercise every day, eat well, get plenty of sleep well and you will lead a happy and healthy life.

    Can you correct my essay?
    My name is Ayman Mansur.

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