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    our real role in the life

    Can you correct my article ?

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    our real role in the life


    our attend in this world it’s not for uselessly , the people they should know what it’s him role to the this world , and develop all about that .

    So , what is our role in the life? .. it’s simple , and very beauty , our role it’s the believe with ourselves before every thing , because that is foundation stone .
    then , help the people if necessary , and communicate to them . this is healthy life .

    third , studying children about the values and ethics , and put high curriculum with fun .
    fourth , we must care to our planet , and do it hard work. Love the life and humans it’s nice feeling .

    Finally , the believe to hard working and the insistence to the successful and love this world and humans , will produces to the world Decent life . This is our role to the our llife .
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    Re: our real role in the life

    Do they not teach you to punctuate in English? It's not optional in real English, no matter what you might see on the web.
    Every sentence must start with a capital letter. You don't put a space before a comma or a period. Two dots is not a punctuation mark.
    You should fix all these first.

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    Re: our real role in the life

    Hello TurkiTaya, and welcome to the forum.

    Quote Originally Posted by TurkiTaya View Post
    Can you correct my article please?

    Our Real Role in the Life

    Our attend purpose in this world itís is not trivial. for uselessly , the People they should know what itís him their role to is in the this world and live their lives according to that. develop all about that .

    So, what is our role in the life? Itís simple, and very beautiful. Our role itís the is to believe with in ourselves before every thing anything else, because that is the foundation stone for a fulfilled life.

    then , After that, our role in life is to help the other people in their hour of need. if necessary , and communicate to them . This is how to live a healthy meaningful life.

    Third, our goals should include studying teaching children about the good values and ethics, and put high ensuring educational curricula are high quality with but fun at the same time.

    Fourth, we must care to about our planet and do it and put in all the effort and hard work to conserve the natural environment. Love the life and humans people; itís a nice feeling.

    Finally, the believe to hard work, the endeavour to succeed ing and the insistence to the successful and love of this world and its people humans , will produces to the world ensure everyone has a decent life. This is our role to the our in life.

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