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    Would you proofread my following writing?

    Hi teachers,

    Would you please proofread my following writing?

    "Sharing and cooperation is a vital life skill. We are happy to learn that she shares and cooperate well with her classmates at school. We are also glad to see that she is engaged and interested in school hands-on science experiment. Thank you teachers for using difference teaching strategies and getting her excited about learning. As a parents, we also love to look for opportunities around us to capitalize on the educational to our kid in our everyday life. I think this is fun and can give her a better understanding of what she is learning."

    Many thanks!
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 19-May-2017 at 08:56. Reason: Reduced font size

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    Re: Would you proofread my following writing?

    Welcome to the forum.

    When are you going to submit your piece of writing to your teacher/tutor for grading or marking?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Would you proofread my following writing?

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Welcome to the forum.

    When are you going to submit your piece of writing to your teacher/tutor for grading or marking?
    Thank you :) I need by next Monday. I hope it could be done on this Saturday.

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    Re: Would you proofread my following writing?

    After you have submitted it to your teacher, if you need any help with it, or the teacher's comments on it, you can repost it here.
    “Every miserable fool who has nothing at all of which he can be proud, adopts as a last resource pride in the nation to which he belongs; he is ready and happy to defend all its faults and follies tooth and nail, thus reimbursing himself for his own inferiority.”

    — Arthur Schopenhauer

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    Re: Would you proofread my following writing?

    As you can see from bhaisahab's post, we can't help you before you submit it. It would be entirely unfair for you to submit work that you have not done by yourself. Your teacher needs to see your errors so that he/she can work out how to help you.

    We don't help anyone with homework or assignments here.

    Thread closed.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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