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    #1

    Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house

    Hello.


    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


    -Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house, or outside the any place where I was. He would stand still and stare at me. and looked at me like as if he wanted to say something, without chasing me while I was walking as he usually did. But in his eyes you could see something tht was not right. Maybe with a normal person I could think about talk to him for the last time and end all this madness to finally close the chapter so he could go on with his life. But I realized that he was a person who was definitely not normal and would never understand.

    -So,what you are telling me, is that Kevin acted like your doormat, he was obsessed with you, and after you broke his heart, he didn`t take it well?"


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    #2

    Re: Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house

    What are you trying to express with "Besides sometimes"? It's not natural.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house

    A doormat and a stalker are two very different things.

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    Re: Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house

    -Besides what I said, sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house, or outside the any place where I was. He would stand still and stare at me. and looked at me like as if he wanted to say something, without chasing me while I was walking as he usually did. But in his eyes you could see something tht was not right. Maybe with a normal person I could think about talk to him for the last time and end all this madness to finally close the chapter so he could go on with his life. But I realized that he was a person who was definitely not normal and would never understand.

    -So,what you are telling me, is that first Kevin acted like your doormat, and then he was obsessed with you, and after you broke his heart, he didn`t take it well?"


    Is that grammatically correct?
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    Re: Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    -Besides what I said, Also, sometimes (no comma here) Kevin waited outside of my house, or outside the any place anywhere I was. He would stand still and stare at me (no full stop here) and looked look at me like as if he wanted to say something, but without chasing me while I was walking as he usually did. But in his eyes you could see something that was not right. Maybe with if he was a normal person I could think about talking to him for the last time and ending all this madness to finally close the chapter so he could go on with his life. But I realized that he was a person who was definitely not normal and would never understand.

    -So (no comma here) what you are telling me (no comma here) is that at first Kevin acted like your doormat, and then he was became obsessed with you (no comma here) and, after when you broke his heart, he didn't take it well?"
    See above.
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    Re: Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house

    Nikitus, what you describe are the actions of a stalker. A doormat is somebody who (metaphorically) lets you walk all over him. That is not what I see being described here.

    Please note carefully the corrections offered by Ems. They should be quite helpful.

    You need to work on making your writing more understandable.

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    Re: Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house

    I don't think it's unreasonable to say that at first he was a doormat but later on he became a stalker.
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    #8

    Re: Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside of my house

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    I don't think it's unreasonable to say that at first he was a doormat but later on he became a stalker.
    Yes, she uses the word doormat, but the actions she describes are inconsistent with that personality.

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