Interview follow up questions

[mstrahal]

Hi Everyone,
I wanted to ask you whether you could help me to improve my interview follow up email. I would be glad if there is someone who could help me to do even better impression. It's my dream job and I don't want to mess it up.

Here is my follow up email:

Thank you for all the advice you have provided me during my job interview.
I learned much more about the position and the (confidential) team from the following interviews. (Just to give you background we worked together 2 years ago, so he was giving me advice what to ask at the end of the interviews etc., I had 5 interviews on that day with different people, but from the same team)
It was a pleasure meeting with you again (I had with him interview twice). I am very enthusiastic about the possibility of joining the (confidential) team.

Thanks again, and I hope to hear from you in the near future.
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If there is anything you would add to that email I would be happy for any feedback!

Thank you very much in advance.

Best regards,
Marek

 

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[teechar]

Hi Everyone,
I wanted to ask you whether you could help me to improve my interview follow-up email. I would be [STRIKE]glad[/STRIKE] obliged if [STRIKE]there is[/STRIKE] someone [STRIKE]who[/STRIKE] could help me to [STRIKE]do even[/STRIKE] give a better impression. It's my dream job, and I don't want to mess it up.
Here is my follow-up email:

Thank you for all the valuable advice you [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] provided to me during [STRIKE]my job[/STRIKE] the recent interview.
I learned much [STRIKE]more[/STRIKE] about the position and the (confidential) team from the following interviews. (Just to give you some background, we worked together 2 years ago, so he was giving me advice on what to ask at the end of the interviews etc. I had 5 interviews on that day with different people, but from the same team.)
It was a pleasure meeting with you again (I had two interviews with him.) [STRIKE]interview twice).[/STRIKE] I am very [STRIKE]enthusiastic about the possibility[/STRIKE] excited by the prospect of joining the (confidential) team.

Thanks again, and I hope to hear from you in the near future.

If there is anything you [STRIKE]would[/STRIKE] could add to that email, I would be happy to see your suggestion. [STRIKE]for any feedback![/STRIKE]

Thank you very much in advance.

Best regards,
Marek

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Also, I don't understand the text in blue.